Thursday, 8 November 2018

Diamante poem

                                                            Elephant

                                                          huge eating

                                         stomping splashing squirting

                                             smelly rough soft cute 

                                        snuggling sleeping playing 

                                                       small silky

                                                          puppy

In my class we have been learning Diamante poems and that is one of my poems.

I like diamante poems because you have to choose a oppisite thing to the other 

thing that you are writing.

do you know what a diamante poem is?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Charlee, I like how you did your diamante poem I like how you did the poem about a
    puppy and a elephant are they your favourite animals? I think maby you shuold try and do more
    than two. I really liked it!

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