The Wonderful story

In Room 2 we had to do narrative writing what we had to do first was write the story in your book.
Then edit it and put it in paragraphs my story was called Charlee is amazing i know its a strange name but oh well.
Then after we did tat we had to type it up on our chrome books in paragraphs.
And my story is about Charlee being amazing and Donna takes over Charlee`s amazingness.
So there is my story what do you think it is good?


Charlee is amazing……..

Here we go again. Welcome back to the finest show ever where we tell you real life stories today we have the story Charlee is amazing…….. So let's head on into the story ( you might want to get some popcorn ).

One day it was a MIND BLOWING! Day because Charlee got crowned by the cool Queen who surfs . Charlee ́s crown was gold and diamonds on it the Queen's name was Mrs Hooper Looper. Now Charlee is the most amazing person in the world and also now rules the world.

Charlee and Donna were fighting outside of Charlee’s palace that is white with gold lights. The lights shined over Charlee and Donna as they argued loudly.

When they stopped arguing Donna went home to make a plan to take over Charlee ́s amazingness while she layed in bed. She writes down what she needed To do and it said to show off, act amazing, cool, and be caring.

AND then ¨ IT WORKED ̈  Charlee angrily said Donna took over and it took about 3 weeks to take over because she was showing off in front of people and acting amazing. Charlee got Furious and also made a plan to take over Donna and they also hated each other.

Then she did take over it took about 2 weeks because it is really easy to take over Donna. Donna was kinda angry and she loudly said ̈ I AM SICK OF THIS ̈

Then a couple days later Charlee found out Billie Eilish was her cousin and Charlee also got some new guards Potato man who is a Potato and Bacon man who is bacon. Also everyone wanted to see Billie Eilish and Charlee at the palace but Donna just wanted to see Billie Eilish.

Bye Bye said everyone in the audience Bacon man and Potato man trip over in the background. Then everyone in the audience disappears into the sun.
DUN DUN DUN!