The Dare Devils

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Hey this is my post about my story of a diving board so have a read through it and hope you enjoy.

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 Everyone was so scared to go on the daredevil diving board until….

This amazing person named Charlee decided to give it a try. She wasn't scared at all. She was excited but Charlee and her friends Aimee and Claudia wanted to do it with her so they all lined up next to each other to do it all at the same time.

Claudia was crying, that's how scared she was. Aimee was pooping her pants, that's how scared she was. They all counted down from the number 10028377463764737328838236 and then on the 1 they jumped, they were so high but…

In mid air they froze in the sky. Everyone watching was so scared and didn't know what to do. Some people called the ambulance but then Alfred the big muscley boy jumped to them in the air and punched them so they wouldn't be frozen. Amelie was frozen in the water and scared that they were going to fall. So Fletcher went to punch Amelie so she wouldn't be frozen and she wasn't. She quickly rushed out of the pool while Charlee,Claudia and Aimee were still in the air frozen

Rico helped Alfred punch them into the water and it worked. As they were falling into the water Aimee bumped her head on the side of the pool and her head fell off. Claudia couldn't stop vomiting and when she fell into the water she sunk all the way to the bottom and drowned. No one noticed but when Charlee was falling into the water she knocked her head on the side of the pool. She had a concussion and got suffocated under a brick because a brick fell onto her neck causing her not to breathe. She ended up dying which was sad because she was a great person.

The End