Friday, 13 December 2019

Why shorty the elf should work with Santa



Hi so this is my post about why Shorty the Elf should work with Santa.
What i had to do was say why a Elf or Reindeer should work with Santa so here are some reasons why.
Do you think he should work with Santa?
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  1. Kieryn Minehan13 December 2019 at 17:10

    Kia ora Charlee, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
    You have done an excellent job writing this post about why Shorty the Elf should work with Santa!
    I think it was a fantastic idea for you to include a picture of Shorty on slide 2. This allows your audience to get the know the main character of your post, and therefore relate to him better!
    It was clever of you to make a list of the reasons why Shorty the Elf should work with Santa. It looks exceeding neat and tidy, and the addition of the raindeer’s names on the right of the list reiterates the idea that this is about an elf during the Christmas season.
    Shorty the Elf sounds like an excellent employee. The way the list has been written is very persuasive, and if I were Santa Claus, I would hire him as soon as possible!
    I definitely think Shorty should work with Santa. He sounds like he would be a real asset to Santa Claus’ team.
    If you were Santa Claus, would you hire Shorty the Elf?
    Keep up the excellent work!
    Nga mihi

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