Friday, 27 November 2020

The wonderful santa story for you!!

 The door swung open revealing…

the toilet overflowing with chocolate that had clumps in it then

I jumped in and  Fell  to the sewers and found a fat Santa moisturising his belly.


We felt like he was drunk It was so funny but we walked further and further away and saw

Sonic hedgehog swimming in melted chocolate.

Giving Birth it was so gross because he was giving birth to a woolly mammoth 

After that I felt like we needed to go back but we couldn't go back because there was Rico the booger monster. 

So we had to fight him to get through when we were fighting the giant booger man he swallowed us up.

but then after a few hours later we came out of his  bum it was slimy but at least we got through him now we need to get back home and out of the toilet we went through the sewers looking for the toilet pipes we found ours but it was clogged up.


so we grabbed a stick and unclogged it. We climbed back up through the pipes cleaning out the chocolate.

Then when we got through the toilet we went to the kitchen and Rico the booger man was there and ate us whole then we died THE END...


WALT: Collaborate to create an intresting narrative.
Hi this is my post about me and Fletchers story we made we made the story by doing sentence for sentence it was really fun i think we got a bit to creative because there are some weird stuff in there.
I actually really enjoyed this because writing creative storys are fun and i think we worked well together.
Whats your favourite form of writing?


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