Friday, 24 April 2020

My story

Once upon a time there was a dog and her owner was Charlee and the dog's name was Ruby. She was a german shepherd and loved to play and sleep but at times she would get angry. But most of the time she was playful and kind and very polite one day she saw a duck at the beach and went to go run after it, then the duck died… Ruby was so sad then she ate it and it was actually an alien when Charlee found out she didn’t really care until she saw Ruby getting taken by aliens to space so Charlee went outside onto her trampoline and bounced so high. Then ended up on the moon and couldn’t find Ruby then Charlee found a elephant on the moon and decided to ride it all the way to Ruby and the Elephant was so nice and loved Charlee so then Charlee took the elephant home and named her Ellie then 2 hours later Charlee remembered that her dog was in space and she didn't know what to do since it was the middle of the night because she was having a dream and woke up and remembered so she thought she would leave for the morning and when she woke up Ruby was laying on her bed she thought it was a dream but it wasn't so Charlee was shocked because she would have heard but it just went back to normal since everyone was shocked and bye bye... oise if Ruby came back

1 comment:

  1. This is a great story Charlee. You have a great imagination. Don't forget to check your punctuation, especially using full stops and commas as some of the sentences are very long. Do you have any pets? I have a dog called Sky.

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