WALT write a story from anothers perspective
Today on the 19th of November My dad brought me and my sister Tilly into school. I Am very nervous but it's fine. When we got to school he made us like a little cage thing with blankets, water , food and tables surrounding us. It was weird but I got used to it.
Now people have started coming in. It was weird and cool i dont know how to act. Neither does my sister but we are staying calm.
And now we see this AMAZING,PERFECT,MOST BRILLIANT person in the world. Her name is Charlee. She's amazing. She hoped in the cage with us and she was patting us but then she left and now we are let free around the classroom never mind my dad brought us back in. But then now he is taking us out yay this is fun i'm going to go eat some pens and pencil…
Ew yuck i won't eat them anymore woah yay Charlee and her friend Scarlett are taking us for a walk yay this is really fun i hope the rest of the day is like this i love it.
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